Remove the paragraph about Facebook in /about#peer-to-peer and tweak the Share Alike section
As reported by Adam Procter (https://discursive.adamprocter.co.uk/activitypub/conversation/adamprocter/5237335)
really like your points on what is small tech. small-tech.org/about/ wanted to offer some constructive critism if that’s ok. I don’t think you need to refer to Facebook directly on the peer to peer section. I don’t think you need to point out the Facebook issues here. I would drop that middle paragraph.
I agree. Having re-read the section, it holds up perfectly well without the middle paragraph (and reads better for the brevity).
Maybe a little edit to the Share alike section too for the same reasons no need to bring in the “opposition” pov. I feel this keeps each section a positive statement. Good stuff.
Ditto. Agree fully.